I aam attacking the paper someone wrote for me and this is the feedback from my professor:

Hi – Thank you for submitting your introductory speech. You earned a D (63%) on this speech. Please review my feedback below, and reach out so that I can provide additional support.

Excellent job keeping your speech clear and consistent throughout your introductory speech. It was easy to hear you.

It is important to make sure that your visual quality is clear and consistent throughout. It should be easy for your audience to view your video.

The speech remained entirely focused on your topic, which can be difficult when speaking aloud.

The speech remained within the time requirement.

You were missing eye contact here. Remember to connect with the audience by making frequent eye contact, just as you would in a conversation. Don’t forget to let your voice and inflection change to reflect your natural emotions, too, and try to use natural gestures. This will make the audience feel like you’re speaking to them, rather than simply reciting something.

Keep working on connecting with your audience via eye contact and expressive voice. Continue to work on this; you will get there! Prior to completing future assignments, review the provided resources (Job Aids and live session recordings) to assist with correctly recording and uploading a video of your speech.

Again, thank you for submitting your introductory speech. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any questions concerning your grade or feedback.

*I am not doing eye contact, only video, in which I do.t have the forms of doing it video.

I have to do Assignment 2.2 which I paid someone to do it and she lied and said I didn’t.

If you have any question, please don’t hesitate to ask me.

I aam attacking the paper someone wrote for me and this is the feedback from my professor: Hi – Thank you for submitting your introductory speech. You earned a D (63%) on this speech. Please review my
Running head: HOW TECHNOLOGY HAS IMPACTED SOCIETY 0 Assignment 2.1: “How Technology Has Impacted Society” Outline Terricita D Samuel COM 201 – The Power of Effective Speaking Professor Stesha Brazil May 3, 2020 “How Technology Has Impacted Society” Outline Topic: How technology has impacted society Introduction – Technology has changed the way we think, do things, and interact with the world Technology has drastically made communication, transportation, and entertainment much easier with accessible access Societies wouldn’t be advanced without the use of technology in the 21st century Thesis Statement – Changes in technology over the years wouldn’t have been thought of in the last generation, now people can communicate, collaborate, and move about the world at faster intervals while making their lives simple and easier. I. First Main Point – we can use the internet, smartphones, or mailing services A. easier to transfer funds or pay bills online or by a phone app B. Shopping C. technology has opened new doors to dating D. communication with family and friends have increased with technology advances II. Second Main Point – entertainment has become easier than before with a simple click or download A. watching or ordering movies for free or for a fee B. access to all types of music from around the world C. films, documentaries, and movies III. Third Main Point – technology advancements have created simple steps to keeping healthy A. apps can now track dieting methods and exercising practices B. information and data is at our fingertips with a simple search C. groceries and common household products are being delivered to your doorstep D. education can be completed at the convince of the student online Conclusion – Life would be drastically different and challenging without these advances in technology Technology has created a gateway to make life easier and more entertaining Have you ever thought about it was living without these advancements in technology over a century ago? References Greenwood, J. (2019). Evolving households: The imprint of technology on life. Mit Press. Henderson, M. M. (Ed.). (2019). Electronic communication: technology and impacts. Routledge.
I aam attacking the paper someone wrote for me and this is the feedback from my professor: Hi – Thank you for submitting your introductory speech. You earned a D (63%) on this speech. Please review my
Sample Outline: Topic By Student COM201 Instructor Name Today’s Date *Please note that the purpose of this template is to assist you with correctly formatting an outline. This sample outline is not on an approved topic, and the thesis statement, main points, and supporting details should not be used in your outline. Please carefully review the Assignment Overview document (located in assignment link) for the approved topics. Also, your outline should not include complete paragraphs, entire speech, or an essay. * Topic: Insert topic here. Introduction Capture your audience’s attention with a quote, anecdote, or personal experience Build up to the main reason for the speech Summarize the main idea and briefly state the main points Working with Microsoft Word Creating a Presentation Building on Previous Work First Main Point: Working with Microsoft Word Move an outline numbered item to the appropriate numbering level Help plan speech and organize thoughts Second Main Point: Creating a Presentation Creating a presentation from a Word outline (Benefits of an Outline, 1) Uses the heading styles Heading styles are applied when you use numbered outlines Each paragraph formatted with the Heading 1 style becomes a new slide, each Heading 2 becomes the first level of text, and so on. Procedures Open the document and use it to create a presentation Open the File menu Main Point 3: Building on previous work Use heading styles to create longer documents To learn more about Outline view, review Microsoft Word Help Conclusion Restate your main points Working with Microsoft Word Creating a Presentation (Effective Use of a Presentation, 2) Building on Previous Work Summarize the presented ideas Restate introduction or conclude with a compelling remark Sources 1.Benefits of an Outline. (2015). Importance of an Outline. Retrieved from http://www.inspiration.com/visual-learning/outlining.org 2. Effective Use of a Presentation. (2018). Retrieved from https://www.effectiveuseofpresentation.edu